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Strango's avatar

What a beautiful poem to start my day. It left me with music playing in my head. Thank you.

venus faye's avatar

Aww, thank you for sharing that! I am a singer songwriter and this poem felt like a song without music! 🙏

Strango's avatar

It hits… beautifully

venus faye's avatar

So glad! ☺️

Krsna PROUT Domine's avatar

Bravo. :)

venus faye's avatar

Thanks so much for reading and leaving encouragement! ♥️

Steven Muir's avatar

Hopeful and inspirational!

venus faye's avatar

Thank you! It was a fun one to write! ☺️

Storm Whisperer's avatar

I loved this. So beautifully true. This line "We don’t create art to impress people.

We create it to remember who we are." Powerful and an important reminder.

~ Nerra ⚔️⚡️⚖️

venus faye's avatar

Thank you for sharing that! We do truly create art to remember who we are. It’s my mission on earth to help myself and others remember our star origins. ✨

Eve Solara's avatar

🔥 🔥 🔥

venus faye's avatar

🌊 💦 ☀️ 🌈 🩷

Gary L Taylor's avatar

That's one of the first things I've read this morning and has provided a great start to my week.

That sweeps you along wonderfully and leaves you feeling lifted come the end. Great work.

venus faye's avatar

I'm so glad you had that experience. I felt similarly to you while writing it today! (Which was your yesterday...) It gave me hope to have it come through and then it was fun to put all the pieces together like a jigsaw puzzle.

Guru Cornflake's avatar

Beautifully transcribed words from your soul🙏💗

venus faye's avatar

Thank you so much! It was a pleasure to write and maybe an even bigger pleasure to share. I really appreciate you! 🥰

Guru Cornflake's avatar

🙏

PancakeSushi's avatar

A perfect cadence, and an uplifting message. Well done!

venus faye's avatar

Awww, thank you so much! I really appreciate you taking the time to read and comment! ☺️

PancakeSushi's avatar

You're most welcome

venus faye's avatar

People are so kind here. I love it here so much. Thanks for being a part of the best thing that's happened to me in a very long time! 🥰

PancakeSushi's avatar

Anytime 😊

Dr.J's avatar

This poem is beautiful! As I was reading it my mind was waiting to hear what the next word was. Your words are lovely and each has just a tiny excitement. Perfect for me! 💖

venus faye's avatar

Thank you for reading and your beautiful encouragement! I was just telling my teen daughters I feel so lucky to be here. ♥️

Marisa Victus's avatar

Beautiful !

venus faye's avatar

Thank you! 🙏

Patricia Rollema's avatar

Thank you for this beautiful poem.

Patricia Rollema's avatar

My pleasure

venus faye's avatar

Aww, thanks for reading and sharing that! I so appreciate it. 🥰

Quiet Bloom's avatar

This is so beautiful, calming, and full of hope. ♥️

venus faye's avatar

Thank you so much for the reflection! And I saw the post you nominated me for! I’m game for it! Thank you! 🙏

Quiet Bloom's avatar

You are welcome. ❤

Looking forward to reading yours!

venus faye's avatar

I just have to sit down now and write it! Soon… like so much in our lives, right? 😝

Quiet Bloom's avatar

Right!

Lydia Fox's avatar

This was so beautiful! Felt like I was sailing to the Undying Lands (like the elves from lord of the rings).

venus faye's avatar

I love that reflection! I have always loved that series. Read it a lot as a kid and young adult. Such magic awaits us!